Monday, February 22, 2016

My favorite sentence of my draft

"But when someone special comes into your life and teaches you a lesson, you will then feels like the whole world has lightened up" is my favorite sentence of the whole draft. I like it because it reflects my main idea of my draft and it also gives a conclusion to my body paragraphs, which illustrates that there's always someone who can extremely change yourself to a better person.

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